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A Broken Key

May 17, 2010
By ErynL SILVER, Anderson, Indiana
ErynL SILVER, Anderson, Indiana
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the rose,
that has grown from concrete
-Tupac Shakur


A broken key,
can only open,
broken things.
It lies shattered and alone.
Hurt but has never shown,
its fear for life,
as a brand new key.
See the way they move with ease,
and the way it moves with pain.
A broken key,
can only open
broken things.
So please broken key,
Open me.

The author's comments:
At this point in my life I felt as if I was broken into pieces by a loss I endured. Then I found my recent boyfriend, who was going through similar struggles as I was, and he felt the same way. Therefore I found out that two broken people can heal each other, and he is my broken key that has opened me.

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ErynL SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 2:08 pm
ErynL SILVER, Anderson, Indiana
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the rose,
that has grown from concrete
-Tupac Shakur

Thank You Very Much (=

janine1018 said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 7:55 am
very nice. :)

ErynL SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 1:54 pm
ErynL SILVER, Anderson, Indiana
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the rose,
that has grown from concrete
-Tupac Shakur

Thank you. (:

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 9:52 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

This is beautiful and totally describes how i feel right now. . .Thank you for putting it into words :)

on Jun. 10 2010 at 11:47 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 412 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

great job(: 5 stars