Musical Candle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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I'm your glimpse of harmonic hope
in the rhythmic night,
where darkness and sleep elope.
Use me, your staccato beat of flickering light.
Listen.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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TheSkyOwesMeRain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2013 at 3:05 am
Very mysterious and dramatic, but I agree, it did end quite suddenly. I love the imagery in the fourth line of the flickering candle. 
 
callie15 said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 6:49 pm
i really like it, but you need to have more. like, you slowly drew me in and then *poof* it was done. really, it is a great start, and plenty of poets struggle between writing too much or too little. but you definally have something here. i never would have though of a candle being musical! again, great job! brava!
 
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