[Rapunzel cried Wolf.]

May 17, 2010
By AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement" -TWLOHA
"Love is our weapon." -Christofer Drew
"I'ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!" -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

Sweetie, I know you can’t tell
You can’t imagine
Something you love so dearly
Could not be real.
But honey, she lies
Through her crooked teeth,
And those so pretty eyes
Conceal secrets and tales
Of how she fashioned her stories
And carefully lied
Rolling her fairy-tales
In paper, like deadly tobacco,
She’s a fake, and I know it,
Though it’s not my place to say,
I’ll tell you, cause honey,
You are a brother to me.
I know that compared to her love,
Nothing tastes as sweet,
But the bitter undertone
Should not be ignored;
It’s placed there by design
It’s meant to warn.
Don’t let your heart fool you,
She’s bursting with spite,
And she will drag you down
With her gleaming eyes
She’ll make you believe
And kill your life with her lies.

The author's comments:
this is for a friend of mine.

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This article has 4 comments.

JessieB SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:55 pm
JessieB SILVER, Elkton, Maryland
7 articles 1 photo 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
an eye for an eye, and the whole world goes blind~Ghandi

this is one of the BEST poems I've read in a longgg time. I really mean it. You have a god given talent for poetry. Use it. It'll get you far.

on Jun. 10 2010 at 1:57 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awesome!! it was full of real and deep emotion, i really enjoyed it!! nice workk

TheJust ELITE said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 8:48 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 946 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

This is really good! Love it!!

on Jun. 8 2010 at 3:22 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
41 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

i love this!, it speaks to me in a way other poems don't, great job i loved reading it


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