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Love/Hate

I hate the way you loved me
I hate it that I cared
I hate the way you make me smile
I hate the way we dared
I hate the startling blue of your eyes
And the way you squeezed my hand
I hate so many other things I simply cannot stand.
I hate that I can't trust you
I hate it when you drink
I hate that you don't call me
I hate the way you think
There may be more things all about you
More things that I hate
But I hate the fact that it's been so long
And you've been the subject of my every song
I can't believe I'm holding on
To someone I so despise
And to think the last thing you said to me
Was that you missed the blue of my eyes.





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carcar11 said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 3:41 pm
wow thats like the story of my life     :( i can realy feel that
 
NeverEnding... said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 9:56 am

i relate to this work almost exactly! it hurts how you can love someone who is your complete opposite, the one you love is the one who makes you sooo mad :(

 

this is very good  :)

 
lostnhim said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 8:35 pm
Wow! This is great! Your a great writer! ( You should check out my poem The Rain... I think you would like it!) (:
 
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