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Love/Hate

May 15, 2010
By broadwaylover432 BRONZE, Bryn Athyn, Pennsylvania
broadwaylover432 BRONZE, Bryn Athyn, Pennsylvania
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I hate the way you loved me
I hate it that I cared
I hate the way you make me smile
I hate the way we dared
I hate the startling blue of your eyes
And the way you squeezed my hand
I hate so many other things I simply cannot stand.
I hate that I can't trust you
I hate it when you drink
I hate that you don't call me
I hate the way you think
There may be more things all about you
More things that I hate
But I hate the fact that it's been so long
And you've been the subject of my every song
I can't believe I'm holding on
To someone I so despise
And to think the last thing you said to me
Was that you missed the blue of my eyes.


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carcar11 said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 3:41 pm
wow thats like the story of my life     :( i can realy feel that

on Jun. 9 2010 at 9:56 am
NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral"
"Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart"
"If we can't be happy, maybe we shouldn't be together"
"Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me"

i relate to this work almost exactly! it hurts how you can love someone who is your complete opposite, the one you love is the one who makes you sooo mad :(

 

this is very good  :)


on Jun. 8 2010 at 8:35 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Wow! This is great! Your a great writer! ( You should check out my poem The Rain... I think you would like it!) (: