The Scar Remains

Your name sends shivers down my spine
And cracks my heart down the middle
A drop of blood falls as a single tear
The tears keeps falling, until the heart is pale
But the scar remains

These memories pick at the wound
Tis' but a name, my heart doth beat for
Tis' a name i wish i never knew





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VictoriaE said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 11:24 pm
I think that if you keep going with this poem, you could possibly write really good lyrics. It's really, really good. I can almost feel the pain and could hear it in a song. Good job.
 
hxcRocker replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 2:19 am
Thank you so much. I guess it could be song lyrics. I'll check out some of your stuff. Could you check out some more of mine?
 
VictoriaE replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 4:19 pm
Of course. I already read all your other stuff, I just didn't get the chance to make more comments.
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 1:39 pm
Jesse this is just... beautiful
 
hxcRocker replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 2:37 am
Thanks. I am still far from your poetic ability though. 
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 4:40 am
not even man  you're past it if anything
 
hxcRocker replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 5:09 am
You write poems, storys, and music....you're ahead of me
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 7:31 pm

your poetry is better than mine

the fact that you don't write anything else doesn't matter if your poetry is better

i just write more  it's not neccisscarially better

(^spelling still sucks)

 
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