The Mistake

May 11, 2010
By Goofy GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
Goofy GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
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A mother ran towards the river
With her mistake in her arms
It cried as if knowing its fate
She bent down to the river and released the mistake
The mother watched as the mistake disapeared under the water
Through the tears in her eyes
She saw the bubbles and wondered,
“Was that the mistake?”


The author's comments:
My original poem was sloppy and all over the place. Thanks to my freinds for helping me with the problems. This is the revised, better version.

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on Aug. 9 2010 at 7:55 pm
inksplatters21 SILVER, Mason, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Character is how you live when no one is watching."

Wow, very sad.  The way you refer to the child as a mistake really gets the point across.  I'd love for it to be a longer poem just because I want to read more.

Would you mind reading/commenting on some of my stuff?  thank you



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