Shower of Kisses

May 14, 2010
I've been walkin' down this road,
Waitin' for you to come hold my hand.
I've walked miles and miles
But nothing is going quite like I planned.

I stop walking,
I've lost all my hope.
My hands are still empty,
How do I cope?

It starts as a drizzle
I look up at the skies
It's a shower of kisses
Now your hand's in mine.





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believer16 said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 9:13 pm
i LOVE writing poetry in the middle of the night haha
 
Amanda13 replied...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 11:27 am
i totally agree!!
 
i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 12:38 pm
awwww :) how cute<3
 
jesseay09 said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:50 pm
very nice.....
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 5:09 pm
Thank you so much! how did you stumble across this poem anyway?
 
mrsabbyjonas13 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 5:26 pm
This is so cute! Beautifully written, too. (: The title is great! I saw it and clicked right away because it was eye-catching. Keep writing and please check out my work!
 
JesusIsMySavior777 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:34 pm

OMB LOVE THIS! im a fan of "ill be fine 899" and u commented on her story so i checked u out. absolutely love this. u dont know HOW MUCH this relates to me!!!! i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :)

ps: im totally faving this

 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 10:13 am
Thank you so much! I'll def be checking out your work! Thank you thank you thank you!
 
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