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Oh, The Joys of Vacation!

May 14, 2010
By cheybabyyy BRONZE, Tampa Bay, Florida
cheybabyyy BRONZE, Tampa Bay, Florida
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Headed to the beach,
My family in the car,
We are all fighting
Like cats in an alley way.
I cannot wait to arrive!

WE'RE FINALLY HERE!
Waves are crashing on the shore,
The sun shines brightly.
Children build large sand castles,
As if they are architects.

It's departure day.
Vacation was so much fun!
It's hard to say bye!
The long journey home begins;
I wave as the ocean fades.


The author's comments:
In class, we had to write a tanka and they are over three different stages of love. I felt vacation would be a great topic because you have the excitement of going to the beach, the actual beach, and then the feeling once you leave the beach.

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