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Paper & Plastic

I used to have a paper heart
That I would wear on my sleeve
You ripped it off, crumpled it up
You made your choice to leave

So I made another heart
I kept it hidden and strong
Until i gave it away again
My decision turned out wrong

Now you walk in, acting cool
Your ego radiating off your
Hollister shirt
Sure you're cute and sweet
like Splenda
But I know your type you lying flirt

I've had my heart torn, thrown, forgotten
You think I'll come back to you like stretched elastic
You think my heart is still made of paper
Well guess what boy, it's Plastic




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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 6:01 pm:
Very cleverly written. I applaud your rhythm, and the last line was quite a blow! Keep writing.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 1:15 am :
Thank you sooo much minddancer and silentraven:)
 
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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 10:27 pm:
haha i love the last line!! great job!!!!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 2:42 pm :
thank you:)
 
minddancer replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 5:50 pm :
I.LOVE.THIS.FUKIN.ARTICLE.!!!
 
minddancer replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 5:51 pm :
the last stanza spoke to me!
 
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A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 4:37 pm:
The last stanza completed this poem perfectly. Very relatable. :) I love it!
 
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Aquafina said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 2:26 pm:
I love this and I know a lot of ppl can relate to it. Awesome job!!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 2:52 pm :
Thank you              
 
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LesKore said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 1:08 am:
the wit at the end is excellent, this poem just seems alive (if that makes any sense at all)
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 7:53 pm :
it does thank you:)
 
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Thrush said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 8:44 am:
I like the style, and the last line is perfect!!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 1:31 am :
Thank Youuuuuuuuu:)
 
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mwahxandxmwa said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 6:25 pm:

Your point is so apparent, even though the poem is witty, your point has not been lost in the laughter.

You have a flow and rythm that some other writers can not master.

You should be very proud :D

 

 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 6:41 pm :
Thanx this is my favorite that i've written so far:)
 
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RenaissanceMan said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 1:12 pm:
Good job! I like ur style. Keep this up!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:44 pm :
Thank you:)
 
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JandeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 1:53 pm:
Well done. This is very easy to relate to and is witty. Great concept.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 2:16 pm :
Thank You:)
 
MadAsAHatter... replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:24 pm :
I like this, relateable and to the point.
 
relientkgirlie replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 10:59 am :
I love this! cute & witty :) good title too
 
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