Of Tongues

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Resolute
Peaceful
Curt
like a cat's claws
(digging and digging)

"not now,
it can wait."

Hesitant
Unsure
Tense
the cat purrs,
basking in light of

Realization.
(claws dig deeper)

Understood
Clever
Bright

"it can't wait,

go get it, Rover."





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Solnyshko This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 12:07 am
So basically...if you guys really hate the poem so much to give it low ratings, then tell me why. We're all just doing our best here, so give me some feedback. I write weird poetry. Some might not call it poetry, but it comes from the way I think about things, and I realize that it might not be the same way you think about something. So tell me what you're thinking, so I can improve my writing and let a broader audience understand what I'm thinking. K. Thanks, guys!
 
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