Words Unspoken

May 12, 2010
By Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"


My words and thoughts shall not be reclusive anymore,
Love will no longer stick on the tip of my tongue,
These words do not need to be shouted or sung,
Meirly said,
Perhaps it is only in my head.

These feelings must be birds, not caged,
If I don’t get some courage soon,
These thoughts will check into an eternal hotel,
Collecting dust,
Never able to bust,
Unlike the butterflies that fiddle in my stomach, when I see him.
Why can’t my words be like the butterflies and come out on a whim?

Rejection shouldn’t hold me back,
I must try, at least take a crack.
But every time I try to say,
My discouraging thoughts get in the way.

After it all I don’t say whats on my mind,
By now our hands could have been intertwined.

He gave me a goodbye letter that I will keep as a token,
As a memory of my first heart broken,
All because of my words unspoken.


The author's comments:
"Love doesn't come to you, you go to it. Take the chance."

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on Jul. 12 2010 at 8:12 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thankyou so much!!! can u believe this: someone gave this one star!!! :(

on Jul. 12 2010 at 7:04 pm
Demon_of_Truth, Warrenton, Virginia
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"I'm not a geek, I prefer the term 'intellectual bad-a**"

That was really good, I liked it alot! :)

on Jul. 7 2010 at 4:52 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow!! thaknks so much that means a lot!!

on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:28 am
Tayy♥ PLATINUM, Winchester, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Forget your past live in the present and plan for the future

Wow , this left me without words to explain it ! I loved it !

on Jul. 5 2010 at 7:14 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow!! thankyou so much-btw love that quote!!!

on Jul. 4 2010 at 8:18 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

→Wow!!! Simply out of words. Best poem I read today. It reminds me of the quotes that say: "Hearts are often broken by words left unspoken" Grrrr-eat job :)

on Jul. 3 2010 at 5:39 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thankyou so much!!! :)

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on Jul. 3 2010 at 5:38 pm
wow, thankyou so much-that's so nice!!:)

on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:41 pm
tashababi SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
only the stong survive in a world of heartbrake and lies

WOW!!! i love the format and just the writing it self it's amazing and easy to realate to thanx for yer comment on my artical and thank yew for the chance 2 read yers

on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:14 pm
xstargazerx BRONZE, Jackson, New Jersey
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wow that was amazing!!! i loved how it rhymed but it still had a free-verse feel. & thanks for checking out my stuff:)

on Jul. 1 2010 at 5:24 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

lolzz thankyou so much!! it really does mean alot:)

on Jul. 1 2010 at 5:23 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow, thankyou so much it means a lot! be sure to check out some of my other work if you get a chance:)

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on Jul. 1 2010 at 6:04 am
anime18 SILVER, Brampton, Other
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Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.

WOW THAT WAS TRULY AMAZING, HONESTLY IT WAS REALLY PROFOUND.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:37 pm
3lizuhb3th BRONZE, Bath, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What is family?
They were the people who claimed you. In good, in bad, in parts or in whole, they were the ones who showed up, who stayed in there, regardless. It isn't just about blood relations or sharing chromosomes, but something wider, bigger. We have many families over time. Our family of origin, the family we created, as well as the groups you move through while all of this was happening; friends, lovers, sometimes even strangers. None of them are perfect and we can't expect them to be. You couldn't make any one person your world. The trick was to take what each could give you and build a world from it."













- Lock and Key.

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on Jun. 27 2010 at 2:07 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow!!! thankyou so much!!! i would love it if you would check out some  of my other work too!:)

on Jun. 26 2010 at 2:36 pm
Spectacles SILVER, Grass Valley, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not your abilities that make you who you are, it is what you use them for."

This is really beautiful! and I can relate pretty easily.  =)

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on Jun. 24 2010 at 2:36 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

AlrightY :)) thanks!

on Jun. 23 2010 at 4:41 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

will do!!!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 4:36 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Really? Ill check more of your work when they're published :) Make sure you post a commet on one or more lol of my work so I can find you easily later on :)

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on Jun. 23 2010 at 3:04 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

ur welcome


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