roses are red

May 12, 2010
By blondie707 SILVER, Eureka, California
blondie707 SILVER, Eureka, California
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
no boy is worth your tears and the one who is wont make you cry.


roses are red,
violets are blue,
i wanna be with you forever,
because i really love you.
I gave you my heart, you protected it.
you gave my heart love,
and showed me what lovw was,
and you did it because,
you said you loved me to.


The author's comments:
i make this poem cuz i love my boyfriend!!

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on May. 19 2011 at 6:16 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this is great this is how i feel about my boyfriend too!! its so relatalble great job!!

 


on Jan. 19 2011 at 2:59 pm
blondie707 SILVER, Eureka, California
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
no boy is worth your tears and the one who is wont make you cry.

thank you alot.

on Oct. 29 2010 at 3:03 pm
blondie707 SILVER, Eureka, California
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
no boy is worth your tears and the one who is wont make you cry.

thank you i love writing poems on my free time and thank you for the miss spelling thing it was really nice of you...no affence takin

on Jun. 5 2010 at 3:14 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

love your poem puts a new twist on old work

on Jun. 4 2010 at 11:58 pm
MistressoftheNIght SILVER, Dexter, Missouri
8 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We start dieing the monent we are conseved" ----- anoynimes

This poem is really great and i live it

on Jun. 4 2010 at 5:49 pm
alexkeup93 SILVER, Turlock, California
5 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live every day like it's your last.

this poem is awesome. you have real talent. don't stop writing!

lilyxoxo GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 3:26 pm
lilyxoxo GOLD, Springfeild, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
love last forever as long as you dont lie or try to hide

i luv it sooo much keep on writing you have a talent

on Jun. 4 2010 at 10:13 am
WinterMoon GOLD, Waynesburg, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
life is hard, but it could be harder
Suicide is for people who are too weak for the real world.
Those who dance are thought to be crazy by those who don’t hear the music.
People change, things go wrong. Just remember, life goes on.
What you feed your mind is what it gives back to you!
Be conscious of your subconscious mind. It’s the storage area for all the things you don’t pay attention to. It will eventually yield and even take over your conscious mind.
Life is all about challenges. To become an over comer, you don’t have to allow obstacles to become an impediment, but rather a stepping stone to your goals.
I have failed over and over in my life and that is why I succeed.
Imitation is Limitation.
Life is like a novel with the end ripped out.
Life is like a game of baseball
You’ll never know if you make the home run
UNLESS YOU SWING
Life is about creating yourself, not finding yourself!
There could be many options in your life, but before this life you had no option. So live with it
Life is like a dream. There’s good times and there’s nightmares. Life will only last so long, but your dreams will go on forever.
“Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass. It’s about dancing in the rain..!”
“Enjoy what you can, endure what you must”
Love never ends, but life does.
Things turn out best for people who make the best out of the way things turn out
Love is like a rainbow: the more you see it, the more you realize what a miracle it really is.
Life is about falling – Living is about getting backup.
never have regrets, because at one point everything you did in life was exactly what you wanted
“And in the end, it’s not the years in your life that count. It’s the life in your years.”
Dreams are like stars…one blows up and another one gets brighter
Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That’s why it’s called the present.
You only live once, but if you work it right, once is enough.
God, if I can’t have what I want, let me want what I have.
Life is like an onion: You peel it off one layer at a time, and sometimes you weep.

Hi! I absolutely loved it! I just want to let you know that you spelt love wrong in one of the verses, pleasedon't thinkI'm trying to be hateful because Iam not. Well, this poem willprobably make your boyfriend cry, if he is the sensitive type any way. Keep writing!

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Tammy



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