roses are red

May 12, 2010
roses are red,
violets are blue,
i wanna be with you forever,
because i really love you.
I gave you my heart, you protected it.
you gave my heart love,
and showed me what lovw was,
and you did it because,
you said you loved me to.





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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2011 at 6:16 pm

wow this is great this is how i feel about my boyfriend too!! its so relatalble great job!!

 

 
FallinAngelsHalo said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 11:58 pm
This poem is really great and i live it
 
Listen replied...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 3:14 pm
love your poem puts a new twist on old work
 
alexkeup93 said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 5:49 pm
this poem is awesome. you have real talent. don't stop writing!
 
lilyxoxo said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 3:26 pm
i luv it sooo much keep on writing you have a talent
 
blondie707 replied...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 2:59 pm
thank you alot.
 
tmoss1223 said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 10:13 am

Hi! I absolutely loved it! I just want to let you know that you spelt love wrong in one of the verses, pleasedon't thinkI'm trying to be hateful because Iam not. Well, this poem willprobably make your boyfriend cry, if he is the sensitive type any way. Keep writing!

Love

Tammy

 
blondie707 replied...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 3:03 pm
thank you i love writing poems on my free time and thank you for the miss spelling thing it was really nice of you...no affence takin
 
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