Black Hearted

April 24, 2010
By volleyballchick PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
volleyballchick PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
38 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You changed my world with just one smile, you took my heart with just one kiss."


The scars that my beaten heart hold
are the only proof that I’ve ever loved you.
You stole my heart the minute I saw you.
You nourished it and made me believe
we might fall in love someday.
But then the poison of your words
filled with false love generate in my mind.
You changed your ways
and filled your once caring words
with acid that shot through my heart.
You hit me multiple times with hatred.
My heart has became a hole
because you’ve destroyed it completely.
The pieces are in a box in your closet.
You use them to remind you
of what you’ve done to me.
It’s your trophy from the horrible crime
you have so selfishly committed.
I just wish that you would have feelings.
That your heart would return to you.
I don’t like the piece of black coal
that beats in place of your stolen heart.
If only you would see how you treat others
and how you destroyed them
then maybe you would fine the courage
to go get your heart back but you don’t.
You wont.
You don’t care about anyone but you.
And I feel bad for you
because you will never fell truly loved
and its all your fault.
You’ve brought it upon yourself.
I wish you the best of luck on your black hole of a life.


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qekelly1 GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 7:52 am
qekelly1 GOLD, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
if you do what uve always done, you'll always get what youve always gotten

this guy just broke my heart so i was questioning everything he has ever said. but the best part about having ur heart broken is all the writing that comes out of it. thats the only real brightside , other wise heartbreak leaves a crappy feeeling lol

on Jun. 10 2010 at 7:29 am
volleyballchick PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
38 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You changed my world with just one smile, you took my heart with just one kiss."

same here. i had my heart broken a while back and now i can just write anything sad and depressing whenever. it might not be as good as when i write because im feeling something but still.

qekelly1 GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 7:18 am
qekelly1 GOLD, Wayne, New Jersey
16 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you do what uve always done, you'll always get what youve always gotten

np =) same mine was posted and all iwas doing was venting... ididnt even think it would go anywhere

on Jun. 9 2010 at 7:53 am
volleyballchick PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
38 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You changed my world with just one smile, you took my heart with just one kiss."

haha thanks. (: ive never really written poetry till this year.

qekelly1 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 7:17 am
qekelly1 GOLD, Wayne, New Jersey
16 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you do what uve always done, you'll always get what youve always gotten

I LOVE IT! it makes sooo much sense.. ur really good


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