Dawning MAG

April 24, 2010
By strudel95 GOLD, Bosque Farms, New Mexico
strudel95 GOLD, Bosque Farms, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Skys the limit :D

A thousand steps ago
when i was a sleepy kid
in a warm room with eighteen dreams
it was summer
as long as i can remember
i sit in the couch early morning
pajamas wrinkling beneath me
the bright morning sun gazing over the mountains
the house lets in the light, study around me
as i get ready in the morning
and probably a million mornings
run away through rough rains
as the Sun and i rise together
and i in my brand new light
which is not torn or worn yet
told the sunrise my dreams
and thought dawn could really see
the speed in the bright
yellow light

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on May. 26 2011 at 3:08 pm
Faithful365 BRONZE, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Amazing! i really liked the imagery you used!

Mr.OHIO GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:39 pm
Mr.OHIO GOLD, Bosque Farms, New Mexico
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BAM!!!!!!! you thought mine was good? you just blew mine out the water girly


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