Disgusting Lies

April 24, 2010
By CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
14 articles 11 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to take life less seriously to get where you want to be."


I've seen pictures of rotting rainbows
Rotting off of us and our scrounging skins
All because we ate combusted cotton
And Haven's late again
I started without her
Summer symptoms provide:
Angst, love, fun, and capillary trees!
And in the volcanic sky I can see broken leaves
And yes, there is a silver lining


The author's comments:
This was a free-association writing. The best I can interpret this is that this is the best way my mind can translate how I was feeling at the time about my situation with my ex-girlfriend.

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:51 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

The last line is my favorite:

'And yes, there is a silver lining'

You had excellent diction throughout the whole piece and I love the clear descriptions in each line. Good job! :)



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