Disgusting Lies

April 24, 2010
I've seen pictures of rotting rainbows
Rotting off of us and our scrounging skins
All because we ate combusted cotton
And Haven's late again
I started without her
Summer symptoms provide:
Angst, love, fun, and capillary trees!
And in the volcanic sky I can see broken leaves
And yes, there is a silver lining

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A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 10:51 pm

The last line is my favorite:

'And yes, there is a silver lining'

You had excellent diction throughout the whole piece and I love the clear descriptions in each line. Good job! :)

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