May 6, 2010
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I keep falling into abyss
A million emotions go through me
Shame, sadness but above all fear
Fear to fail
Fear to unachieved
Fear to opinion
When I finally fall
To this unmerciful ground
All I can see in this test
Is blank

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brit15 said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 6:07 pm
The title of the poem itself makes me want to read it i really like how you led up to the ending with this poem stating all the things to fear. I like poems that are written like that and i think you did good on this one. This is my favorite of all your poems! :) 
G.M.Palacio replied...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 7:58 pm
Thank you so much for leaving a comment. I'm really happy that you like the poem and that it's your favorite out of the ones I've posted. Thanks again. :-)
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