was it so

May 6, 2010
By andy5 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
andy5 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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two hearts collide in battle
one not knowing if it is right
the other fearing death it self
nether lessening to what is inside
first to punch
second to strike
it seemed to be inevitable
these to
to fight
neither fearing love
but death
so were they truly in love
can you not fear death and love at once
or were they just puppet
to there body lust
so young
and only known each other
for such short time
was it really right
for two such as these
to love
can on one comprehend them
can no one justify them
give me grief
give me trials
as long as you know
i am well made
my heart is still fair
it still beats
i just ask you if you know
weather he or she knew
what love truly was
can you not answer such a simple question
or does the story tell me all
cause if it does
love is blind
and i fear
for us all

The author's comments:
i was thinking of the famous death scene from romeo and juliet when i wote this poem

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andy5 BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2010 at 7:37 pm
andy5 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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it is not supposed to say can on one it is supposed to say can no one


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