Im loving you!

May 9, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."


Laughters, smiles, hugs, kisses; no longer help free my pain!

I feel lonely all the time, no matter who's around I always feel the same!

Its nobody's fault, I think myself is the one I am to blame..

Im in pain, constantly, I'm saying it its not a shame

feel me, help me, understand me, do it all over again

Be mine, make me yours, Play with me under the drops of rain

Tell me you love me, and mean it, Me, is what you will gain!

Dance with me all night long, hold my hand, and with me get so crazy, lets get insane!

Can I say you mean so much too me, thats why I talk to you, you're the road thats leading my train,

Help me understand who am I? tell me now, Explain!

If this whole world leaves me, Promise me, on my side you'll remain!

.. And I'm telling you this, its not lame!?!

Say it back, and on each other we will maintain

When I truley love you; your desire will run down my vein

I need you, walk me through all this, let your hand be my cane!

I love you, can I say it, Or will you complain??


The author's comments:
NO additional comments, than what my poem states, I hope you like it , tell me your opinion through the comments, Thank you! :))Enjoy my work!

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Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 11:14 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Your words always add value to my work, thanks Jay!

jeph15 said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 12:59 am
beautiful i thought it was great!!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 8:23 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Thank you!! Im pretty sure you are too, Ill check your work as soon as I have a chance to do so, again thanks for posting such a supportive comment! :)

on Jun. 2 2010 at 5:00 pm
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
72 articles 31 photos 57 comments
All I can say is amazing! You are a talented poet. I would really like to know what you think of my work also.


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