mark on the mirror

i only have one heart,
why are you tearing it apart?
i’m terribly confused,
i don’t know who to choose,
but either way i do know,
that it will leave a bruise.
because either way i’ll lose,
and i’m horribly confused,
why are you tearing me apart?
did you forget?
i only have
one

heart.





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WritingLoverForever said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 1:58 pm
One word: amazing. Very well written.
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 10:06 am
thank you! (:
 
AndTheVinesSpin said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 6:43 am

I absolutely love love love love love this! Great rhyming, by the way.

Five stars for you =]

[thankyou so much for looking at my work and giving me feedback. It means the world to me, and pushes me to keep writing. I alwaaays return favours =]

 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 3:00 pm
thank you(;
 
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