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Loose Yourself

May 8, 2010
By gothchk94 SILVER, Whitehall, Pennsylvania
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In truth, though truths are not so often told,
we, meaning you and I, are not so different.
We are human and we are flawed.

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I should have never loved you,
but I couldn't control myself,
but now my emotions are shut down,
my hearts on lock down,
broken and tattered,
as if nothing really mattered,
my love is a loss,
a rolling stone gathers no moss,
stick to who you are,
don't loose yourself in the war.
The love, the hate, the pain we say, brings another day...

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

The author's comments:
I once fell in love. I lost myself in the tangled web. I changed and morphed into my greatest hate...in the struggle for survival I conform to the game.
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