Beloved

April 28, 2010
By BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something, let it be. If it doesn't come back to you, it was never ment to be.


Night falls over Earth,
The moon hangs low in the sky,
Silently I dream.

I dream of my love,
How he holds me so tightly,
And never lets go.

His strong face I see,
Under the moonlight we dance,
Our feet glide on air.

His thin lips meet mine,
I wish this moment would last,
But it goes away.

We stand there breathless,
Taking in our surroundings,
He starts to smile.

I love you darling,
He whispers in my cold ear,
Always stay with me.

I slowly wake up,
Reality hits me hard,
For he is not there.

I long to see him,
But he is just an image,
Meant for someone else.

Sadly not for me,
A warm tear rolls down my cheek,
Only in my dreams.


The author's comments:
This poem is a haiku with mutiple stanza's. I wasn't sure what to classify it as, so i just put it under free verse :) i hope you guys like it. Oh, and this is my first poem on here so please comment!

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on Jun. 30 2010 at 1:20 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Heres the link too all my work, http:// TeenInk.com/users/Dominicangirl

on Jun. 30 2010 at 1:15 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

I'll just send you a link too all my work, hope it works. :)

TeenInk.com/users/Dominicangirl

 


BeloveD SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 1:06 am
BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something, let it be. If it doesn't come back to you, it was never ment to be.

hey i cant find the stories you told me to read.... what would i find it under?

on Jun. 6 2010 at 7:30 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Loll haha thts funnyy! & thnkks

BeloveD SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:18 pm
BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something, let it be. If it doesn't come back to you, it was never ment to be.

thanks :) i have two more poems on the way if you really liked these. one i accidently put the poem in the comment spot and the comment in the poem spot. but oh well. ill read yours :)

on Jun. 2 2010 at 6:58 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Wow its crazy how i can relate to this piece........

I loved iht!! please read Mystery Guy, and/or Mystery guy part 2. Thanks :)

 



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