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He, My Pain, Is My Torturous Love

I am in love with Pain.
This strange relationship we have
It cannot be explained.
These feelings we give off
They are nothing to anyone else.
I put myself in the path of hurting
Just to be crushed by its words.
Yet I still do it so we may become closer.
I love it
But its love for me is different.
We aren’t seen together
But we can communicate non stop
Like one mind.
We know what the other feels.
It needs me
And I need it.
We are one being in two different forms,
Separated by the lives we have
And the names others have created for us.
But I do not care.
These are walls that can be broken down
If we just try.
Pain,
Take my hand,
My heart
My soul
And crush it like you did to every other part of me.
My happiness is gone.
You have it
Along with my passion.
Please, oh please, see
That what you’re doing is killing me.
Over and over we fall into this,
The dance of confused and unconfessed love.
But do you truly love
This being?
Do you really think that she loves you?
Because she does.
She knows the truth of this and the meaning is clear.
I am in love with you, dear Pain,
And I cannot escape the hurt you cause me.





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Wonderment said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 2:21 pm
Wow, very relatable. I think you captured the emptuion of how you felt well. loved it
 
Eowyn said...
May 27, 2010 at 2:38 pm
WOW! This is a great poem.  Keep up the great work!
 
Xxl3rokenHeartsxX said...
May 26, 2010 at 9:12 pm
thiis is a great poem. Love It To Pieces..
 
bloodypoet said...
May 26, 2010 at 11:58 am
i really loved this poem extremly
 
Priskilla said...
May 26, 2010 at 10:58 am

great work thwe poem is meaning full and deep :]

same with the person below

" I am in love with you dear pain"

is my favorite part

KEEP IT UP YOU HAVE GREAT WRITING SKILL

 
Simon,Kayla said...
May 26, 2010 at 10:50 am
I really did fall in love with this poem the moment I started reading! Hopefully you get published someday, I have FULL faith in you!:)
 
Sunset replied...
May 27, 2010 at 1:18 pm
same here that was amazing poetry keep writing
 
MARiSSA! said...
May 25, 2010 at 4:42 pm
fantastic!
 
Dominicangirl said...
May 25, 2010 at 4:33 pm

Wow i really loved this poem, i can relate. "I am in love with you ,dear pain", my favorite line :)

If yu have time please check out my work. thnks

 
MarieDove replied...
May 25, 2010 at 4:50 pm
Thanks. This poem is just helping get through a hard spot in my life. 'Pain' in this poem is a real person in my life I care about. It really hurt me to write this poem. But I'm glad people like it.
 
volleyballchick replied...
May 25, 2010 at 8:50 pm
i think i might understand somewhat what youre going through because i am too. i hate how all you ever feel is pain and like theres a gap missing in your heart. well thats how i feel. sorry for writing this comment. but your poem was really good. read some of mine sometime if you like but they arent very good. :/
 
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