The Thoughts of a Girl

By , Springfield, IL
For why must I wait for him, just him to arrive into my life? I sit, waiting for my answer to come to me. Would I look better straight or curly? Skinny or fat? Will I have my true love if I was different? All questions go through my head, why won’t he come, into my loving, open arms? Is it me or him? My apperance or personality? So as the day goes through it’s normal cycle, I sit and wait for my true love to sweep me up onto my feet and allow me to be myself, and to feel beautiful and special, the way I am.





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Authorgal98 said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 9:17 pm
I'm about to cry! So this is how I act? Haha, i do need to work on my confidence...
 
Dancing replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 9:24 pm
no its not but confidence is always a good thing 2 have :)
 
Authorgal98 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 9:29 pm
haha, but then again i should stop hitting myself/stabbing myself with a spoon.... hahaha Viper Spoon attack!
 
phatbeats This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 25, 2010 at 4:48 pm
this was a good story. just be yourself!!!
 
Dancing replied...
May 31, 2010 at 5:57 pm
Thanks! I tried to make this piece relatible, especially to all the others who feel the same way. I appreicate the comment by the way! :)
 
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