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The Summer Freeze

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In the midst of gentle breezes
and mild, golden sunlight
my heart is freezing.
The cold breath of lonliness and solitude
chilling my very soul.

So I sit, and wait
for Autumn to thaw me,
and Winter to warm me,
before Spring and Summer subdue me once more.




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DanceAwayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 5:45 pm:

this makes sense. I love the line "For Autumn to thaw me" I don't know why but its really nice sounding. You're an awesome poet. keep writing! 

 

 
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Jun. 1, 2010 at 7:45 pm :
*sings* Thank ya very much, thank ya very much, that's the nicest thing that anyone's ever said to meeee! thank you very very veryyyy muuuuuuccchhhhh! *bows* Thank you! Thank you, very much! I shall be here till... a very long time from now!
 
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