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Silence falls over the sparkling white valley

As a bleak winter chill settles.

The bare trees’ weak branches

Bend under the weight of the everlasting ice.

The dull sun’s rays fail to warm the Earth

As a cold, bitter wind howls like a hunting wolf.

A small, lonely bird peers into the unwelcoming grey sky,

Yearning to soar towards new beginnings brought by the spring.




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dre0715 said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 11:22 pm:
Very visual, good job
 
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dancechick2013 said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 1:09 pm:
This poem was kind of hard to follow at first, but I'm kinda slow:) haha..I did like it though..it's very detailed thinking of winter gave me chills! Keep writing, I'd love to read more poems!!
 
Kat2292 replied...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 4:43 pm :
haha Thanks so much! I tend not to write a lot of poetry like this, but I do have a few short poems like haikus and such that I might post :) I've always tended to be a story-writer...kinda. I really want to improve my writing to make it a ton better though!
 
dancechick2013 replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 11:37 am :
It's great! Keep up the good work! :)
 
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_Elsy_ said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 9:24 pm:
Beautiful :], can you chavk out some of my stuff?
 
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