Waiting

May 4, 2010
By Kat2292 BRONZE, Canfield, Ohio
Kat2292 BRONZE, Canfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, call it version 1.0." ~Mark
"Life's like a novel with the end ripped out." ~Rascal Flatts


Silence falls over the sparkling white valley

As a bleak winter chill settles.

The bare trees’ weak branches

Bend under the weight of the everlasting ice.

The dull sun’s rays fail to warm the Earth

As a cold, bitter wind howls like a hunting wolf.

A small, lonely bird peers into the unwelcoming grey sky,

Yearning to soar towards new beginnings brought by the spring.



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dre0715 GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 11:22 pm
dre0715 GOLD, Willow Grove, Pennsylvania
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Very visual, good job

on Jul. 2 2010 at 11:37 am
brittgrace13 SILVER, Sunman, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
View life as a continuous learning experience.

It's great! Keep up the good work! :)

Kat2292 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 4:43 pm
Kat2292 BRONZE, Canfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, call it version 1.0." ~Mark
"Life's like a novel with the end ripped out." ~Rascal Flatts

haha Thanks so much! I tend not to write a lot of poetry like this, but I do have a few short poems like haikus and such that I might post :) I've always tended to be a story-writer...kinda. I really want to improve my writing to make it a ton better though!

on Jun. 24 2010 at 1:09 pm
brittgrace13 SILVER, Sunman, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
View life as a continuous learning experience.

This poem was kind of hard to follow at first, but I'm kinda slow:) haha..I did like it though..it's very detailed thinking of winter gave me chills! Keep writing, I'd love to read more poems!!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 9:24 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Beautiful :], can you chavk out some of my stuff?


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