Convoluted Truth

May 3, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."


The unspoken truth is
cleverly masked behind
clouded and reluctant eyes.
They contain unique wit
and unconditional love; if
only that was enough.
Our eyes search for the
extensively concealed truth in each other
They're just too sugar-coated with our convoluted lies;

"Oh what a tangled web we
weave, when first we practice to deceive."

Your lies keep your
reputation intact, while mine let me keep hold of my
sanity;
These fabrications are forever engrained in my brain; You must know that
eventually everything will
just give.

You see, my lies make me
different from you...
You see, your lies make you
different from me...
This is our story;
It is left carefully wrapped,
entangled,
twisted, and
intertwined in our intracate
downfall for one another.
Our secrets shall never be
unraveled.



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on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:18 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

awww thank uu!! really. it meanz alot. i would luv 2 check out ur work. sorry, da last part of ur comment wont come thru, so ill just check out as much as i can(: thx again 4 taking the time 2 read/comment on my piece! it made my dayy:D

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:21 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

absolutely beautifful:) i saw you comment on another poem i just read and i thought i'd view your work. and one your description you said you were fairly new to writing/creating poetry and wanted feedback...

this is great!!

extremely nice way with vocabulary. really shows your intelligence and flows with a certain powerfullness. i like your wording and the way it flows. great job:)

id love for you to view some of my work and tell me what you think!!

especially my poem 'Torturer of a King.'    :)



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