Convoluted Truth

May 3, 2010
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The unspoken truth is
cleverly masked behind
clouded and reluctant eyes.
They contain unique wit
and unconditional love; if
only that was enough.
Our eyes search for the
extensively concealed truth in each other
They're just too sugar-coated with our convoluted lies;

"Oh what a tangled web we
weave, when first we practice to deceive."

Your lies keep your
reputation intact, while mine let me keep hold of my
These fabrications are forever engrained in my brain; You must know that
eventually everything will
just give.

You see, my lies make me
different from you...
You see, your lies make you
different from me...
This is our story;
It is left carefully wrapped,
twisted, and
intertwined in our intracate
downfall for one another.
Our secrets shall never be

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MercedesXO said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:21 pm

absolutely beautifful:) i saw you comment on another poem i just read and i thought i'd view your work. and one your description you said you were fairly new to writing/creating poetry and wanted feedback...

this is great!!

extremely nice way with vocabulary. really shows your intelligence and flows with a certain powerfullness. i like your wording and the way it flows. great job:)

id love for you to view some of my work and tell me what you think!!

especially my p... (more »)

sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 10:18 pm
awww thank uu!! really. it meanz alot. i would luv 2 check out ur work. sorry, da last part of ur comment wont come thru, so ill just check out as much as i can(: thx again 4 taking the time 2 read/comment on my piece! it made my dayy:D
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