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Chopin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I woke up early to find the sun rising –
a sky painted pink greeted my window.
I sipped tea, sweetened with honey to warm my body and shake the layers of sleep.
You graced my mind,
your sweet Chopin Nocturnes remind me of a delicate sorrow I chose to carry.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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respecturself7 said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 3:48 pm:
I think this is cool. I get that it's short and to the point, but maybe you could add a little more to it. It sounds like it'd be awesome with a few more verses. I really want to know more about what's going on. It's got a lot of detail about the day. You set the scene wonderfully but than I get cut off. There, I said something honest, but than again, I'm not any expert. This is just an opinion.
 
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