Chopin MAG

May 3, 2010
By MandaPerkins GOLD, Layton, Utah
MandaPerkins GOLD, Layton, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.”-Audrey Hepburn


I woke up early to find the sun rising –
a sky painted pink greeted my window.
I sipped tea, sweetened with honey to warm my body and shake the layers of sleep.
You graced my mind,
your sweet Chopin Nocturnes remind me of a delicate sorrow I chose to carry.



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on Jul. 7 2010 at 3:48 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
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Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

I think this is cool. I get that it's short and to the point, but maybe you could add a little more to it. It sounds like it'd be awesome with a few more verses. I really want to know more about what's going on. It's got a lot of detail about the day. You set the scene wonderfully but than I get cut off. There, I said something honest, but than again, I'm not any expert. This is just an opinion.


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