Love's Prayer

May 4, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I crave for someone to see my beauty
And accept me for who I am
I pray for someone who'll love me
Someone to hug and hold my hand

At night I look up and wish
That I will find true love
When my heart is tired of breaking
I get help from the lord above

I search for a deeper meaning
To every tear and kiss
I want someone to love in return
My other half, my heart, my bliss



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on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:28 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:58 am
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 132 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

I love your use of ireggular ryhmes and use of imagery. This is another peice I realy, really like.

on Nov. 18 2011 at 9:52 am
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

You're welcome. :)

on Nov. 17 2011 at 3:27 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you Jacob:)

on Nov. 15 2011 at 2:52 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Wow...  Volumes of words that I have striven so long to find in only three paragraphs... Bravo, nova, bravo...

on Dec. 6 2010 at 12:31 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 513 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

AMAZING!!! How do you do it? I can relate to this right now! i get so jealous watching the girls with their boyfriends and I wonder "Will it ever happen to me?"

on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:35 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx everybody:)

on Oct. 18 2010 at 10:46 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
I LUV IT  AND CAN TOTES RELATE! Awwwww

on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:39 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

I agree wish SamiLynn! :) this is so cute! :) and romantic but sorta sad but veryyy amazing at the same time :) 5 STARS all the way! :)

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:37 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

awwww :) i think EVERYONE can relate to this! this is so romantic :)

on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:37 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you Jynxx:)

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:37 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 268 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

i can really relate to this! 5/5 stars!

on Aug. 13 2010 at 7:16 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx for the feedback:)

on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:15 am
InsaneKitten BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even shadows need light..... "Melissa Marr, Ink Exchange" :D

awww so beautiful "cries"

on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:42 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
31 articles 0 photos 183 comments
oooh I love this! its very petite, which is stupendous for this poem! it sums it all up in just a couple stanzas! gorgeous!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:46 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you very much:)

on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:44 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

Love, love, love, love, love (times 10) this!!! hahahaha. if that made sense

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:30 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:38 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

i. love. THIS!!!!!!!!! this is wonderful! its going to be rated 5 stars and tagged as my favorite. thank you so much! :) <3

on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:44 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx everybody I appreciate it:)


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