Love's Prayer

May 4, 2010
I crave for someone to see my beauty
And accept me for who I am
I pray for someone who'll love me
Someone to hug and hold my hand

At night I look up and wish
That I will find true love
When my heart is tired of breaking
I get help from the lord above

I search for a deeper meaning
To every tear and kiss
I want someone to love in return
My other half, my heart, my bliss





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AnimaCordis said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 11:58 am
I love your use of ireggular ryhmes and use of imagery. This is another peice I realy, really like.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 2:28 pm
thank you:)
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 2:52 pm
Wow...  Volumes of words that I have striven so long to find in only three paragraphs... Bravo, nova, bravo...
 
Supernova7 replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 3:27 pm
Thank you Jacob:)
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss replied...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 9:52 am
You're welcome. :)
 
Supernova7 said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 5:35 pm
Thanx everybody:)
 
CameandgonesmartyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 10:46 pm
I LUV IT  AND CAN TOTES RELATE! Awwwww
 
kmarie14 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 9:39 pm
I agree wish SamiLynn! :) this is so cute! :) and romantic but sorta sad but veryyy amazing at the same time :) 5 STARS all the way! :)
 
SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:37 pm
awwww :) i think EVERYONE can relate to this! this is so romantic :)
 
Jynxx said...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 11:37 pm
i can really relate to this! 5/5 stars!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 10:37 am
Thank you Jynxx:)
 
Supernova7 said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 7:16 pm
Thanx for the feedback:)
 
InsaneKitten said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 10:15 am
awww so beautiful "cries"
 
mandapanda9736 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 2:42 pm
oooh I love this! its very petite, which is stupendous for this poem! it sums it all up in just a couple stanzas! gorgeous!
 
writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:44 pm
Love, love, love, love, love (times 10) this!!! hahahaha. if that made sense
 
Supernova7 replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 7:46 pm
thank you very much:)
 
Lanier42 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 7:38 pm
i. love. THIS!!!!!!!!! this is wonderful! its going to be rated 5 stars and tagged as my favorite. thank you so much! :) <3
 
Supernova7 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Thank you:)
 
Supernova7 said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 2:44 pm
Thanx everybody I appreciate it:)
 
bullet.with.butterfly.wings said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 8:20 pm
my boyfriend is going to have to see this! haha I'm guessing your a romantic...as am i (: i like your work
 
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