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Love's Prayer

May 4, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I crave for someone to see my beauty
And accept me for who I am
I pray for someone who'll love me
Someone to hug and hold my hand

At night I look up and wish
That I will find true love
When my heart is tired of breaking
I get help from the lord above

I search for a deeper meaning
To every tear and kiss
I want someone to love in return
My other half, my heart, my bliss



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on Jul. 16 2010 at 8:20 pm
bullet.with.butterfly.wings PLATINUM, Katy, Texas
36 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
you wear guilt like shakles on your feet, like a maiden in distres, like a halo in reverse

my boyfriend is going to have to see this! haha I'm guessing your a romantic...as am i (: i like your work

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:39 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 431 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

Aweee, how sweet! :)

Rhyme Scheme: Great!

Message: Great!

Written Well: Definitely!


on Jun. 30 2010 at 2:10 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

lol:)                              

on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:42 am
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
33 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

somebody tell Shakespeare to suck it cause this was amazing! haha 5 stars!

on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:08 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Haha I'm glad you like it:)

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:01 am
mary.brodeur BRONZE, Westerly, Rhode Island
3 articles 34 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cause sometimes you just need to throw yourself a party."

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE THIS!! you like practically wrote this about me! :)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:28 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Haha thank you:)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aaaaaaaaaaa-hawwwwwww :)))))) that made me smile nd go 'aww' big time!!! how cutee!!!! i totally love this!!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 3:06 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

No problemo! Your really good!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:44 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you AuthorGal:) 

on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:24 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Your work is so beautifully, painfully true. I love your work, keep writing!

on May. 25 2010 at 6:50 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)

on May. 24 2010 at 11:47 pm
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

very vivid depiction of love here. the rhyme scheme and flow are amazing. great talent!


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