The Four Sides of Hate

May 2, 2010
By JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

Anger is the toxin you take,
Hoping for your foe to quake,
Like the veil behind a lie,
Hoping that your foe will die!

Fury is the double- edged blade,
You swing to send your foe to the grave,
With a cut, a swing, a blow, a slash,
You may have rent a cut in him,
But to yourself you’ve rent the gash

Rage is the all-consuming fire,
The life-eating, wife-beating, baby-eating pyre,
Clouds your judgment, clouds your eyes,
Sharpens your tongue to a sickly spike,
Destroyer of reason, rage is burning higher!

Spite, the lightning-fast-striking,
Strike with thunder fast- you’re not even trying,
Not even trying, to rein yourself in,
You wish to spite him of his sin!

The toxin, the blade, the fire and the lightning,
The Anger, the Fury, the Raging and the Spitening,
Let no thoughts of these entertain you soul,
For down that road, Hell freezes cold!

The author's comments:
I wrote this while seething in anger at my Spanish teacher.

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This article has 3 comments.

on May. 26 2010 at 9:51 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
22 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

This is good... i can definitely relate to this.... but just be careful you don't feel this way about too many people :) Keep writing for suree

on May. 24 2010 at 11:31 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I loved it:) i can reate. could you please read some of my work?

DaniW PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2010 at 9:15 pm
DaniW PLATINUM, New Bern, North Carolina
29 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is revealed only if there is light from within.
By Elisabeth Kuebler-Ross

You have some strong dislike for your Spanish teacher but it sure does translate into an incredible poem. i like this a lot!


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