Suicidal Utopia

May 1, 2010
By caseyanne13 PLATINUM, SM, California
caseyanne13 PLATINUM, SM, California
21 articles 7 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"You are no better than the bottle you are drinking from if you do nothing to stop the flow."

The world revolves
Around you and I.
Our love
Fuels the universe.
The shining stars
Feed off our beauty.

Our love may be young,
But we carry the experiences of the world on our shoulders.
The future is now
So different from the past.
Yearning for the one.
Holding that one close.

The Earth turns
Atop our fragile fingertips.
People reside
Amidst our happiness.
For once, all is how it should be.
If only this happened sooner,
So much we could have saved.

All that matters
Is our love has survived.
Survived so long,
Even at times when
Hope had been demolished.

The author's comments:
I wrote this about my boyfriend and I. We liked each other for so long, and neither of us even knew it. It's just about how we felt, and how we wished we knew sooner so we could have had even longer, better times together.

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This article has 2 comments.

on May. 22 2010 at 3:57 pm
ThAtGuRl PLATINUM, Perris, California
24 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i believe things happen for a reason.people change so you learn to let go,things go wrong so you can appreciate them when thier believe lies so you learn to trust no one but urself and sumtimes good things fall apart so bttr things can 2gthr

i love it too truthfullly it is wriiten beauifuly

on May. 22 2010 at 12:54 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
41 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

i love this. beauifuly written


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