Losing control

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Open up my head
Falling through like quicksand
Slipping through my fingers
Hope this feeling doesn’t linger
Losing my control, I can’t command





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TNT25 said...
May 24, 2010 at 4:04 pm
good. the only suggestion i have is maybe make it a little longer.
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2010 at 5:31 pm
supposed to be open up my hand...
 
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