This Hurts

I hate your Guts.
After everything I’ve
done for you.
I loved you,
You were something
special.
Once again I Loved you.
You took me through Hell.
I’d never thought I’d meet
a guy like you.
You told me things____
“ No Let Me Finsh!”
You Told me things,
that you have never
told anyone.
Your eyes brought
Me closer to you.
When I see you
My mind fills
With fear.
I can’t trust you.
I’m scared of you
From That Moment
Things wouldn’t be the same.
I told you I would never
do anything
to hurt you.
You told me
you would
never leave
my side.
This Hurts. This Sucks.
It Hurts
Cause…
Cause for once,
Just ONCE
I opened
Up to
Someone that
I thought
Cared for me,
Loved Me,
And Trusted
Me.
I opened
my heart
to you and you broke it.
You told me
You couldn’t
Bear hurting
me anymore.
My heart is
Trembling
with hatred
toward you.
I cry over you.
I lost friends
over you.
My family doesn’t
trust you.
But I still
Loved you.
I belived you
when noone
else did.
My mind plays flashbacks
of me and you.
Once again
I love you.
But not Enough
to do this
anymore.
You are
like a
drug,
im addicted
to you.
This Hurts,
Badly enough
for me
to quit.





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LoveBug said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 11:32 am
good!!...could be alot better but it was alright....maybe next  time you should read it before put it on ....but its alright keep going!!!
 
ThegirlwithAFOREVERbrokenheart said...
May 21, 2010 at 9:15 am

i liked it=]

andd i feel the way the poem describes..

 
CarolynQ said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:17 pm
never let critisism put you down i thought this was great... keep it up and take a look at my work :)
 
Origami_Giraffe said...
May 20, 2010 at 8:49 pm
To be brutally honest, this sounds more like a drunken rant then a poem. If this is what you were going for, good job. If not, then you might want to consider polishing it up a little. There's a lot of overused turns of phrases, in fact it's pretty much a list of overused phrases. For a poem to be successful, it has to add something new to the table.
 
instian95 said...
May 20, 2010 at 12:35 pm
its really good...nd i no how u feel...i feel exactly the same...
 
xXxfantasyxXx said...
May 20, 2010 at 12:27 pm
i love this it's amazing!
 
BleedingRose said...
May 20, 2010 at 11:08 am

Love it, has a great flow to it!  :)

-Rose

 
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