I'll Shoot You With A Shooting Star, And....Nothing

May 10, 2010
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If a star shot out of the sky
And hit you on the head
Would you notice it?
Would you not?
How could you not?
How can you not?
I shoot the star
Aiming at you
How could you
How can you not?
I dance through the ice wind
Pictures bluring
As never begins
But how could you not
How could you
How can you not?
I pray for a never ending never
Because it latches me onto you
Is that something you'll come to notice
Do I really mean so little to you?
How can you not notice
When I'm desperate for your attention
I cry out
I lash out
And still
Cold Nothing.
How can you not notice
At least acknowledge me?
I've loved you forever
You ignor me.
I shoot you with shooting stars
Catch the raindrops for you.
I Dance between unseen boarders
Count the grass blades for you.
Do you really not see me now?
How can you not
When I shine as if I'm a star.
Thanks a lot.

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Phoenixx said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 6:24 pm
aha, i love your ending! its amazing! :D 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 5:18 pm
My favorite line: "I pray for a never ending never
Because it latches me onto you"
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:05 pm
"I dance between unseen boarders","dim,black,gone,thanks alot","catch the raindrops for you",and "count the grass blades for you"=man youre good. 5 stars captain. they have to love it. they just have to....
faypirate23 replied...
May 24, 2010 at 10:36 pm
i LOVE THIS i can relate to this in soo many ways love it love u good job partner
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