I'll Shoot You With A Shooting Star, And....Nothing

May 10, 2010
By ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

If a star shot out of the sky
And hit you on the head
Would you notice it?
Would you not?
How could you not?
How can you not?
I shoot the star
Aiming at you
How could you
How can you not?
I dance through the ice wind
Pictures bluring
As never begins
But how could you not
How could you
How can you not?
I pray for a never ending never
Because it latches me onto you
Is that something you'll come to notice
Do I really mean so little to you?
How can you not notice
When I'm desperate for your attention
I cry out
I lash out
And still
Cold Nothing.
How can you not notice
At least acknowledge me?
I've loved you forever
You ignor me.
I shoot you with shooting stars
Catch the raindrops for you.
I Dance between unseen boarders
Count the grass blades for you.
Do you really not see me now?
How can you not
When I shine as if I'm a star.
Thanks a lot.

The author's comments:
Wasted time, tears, breath, and life over you, and you can't even remember my name, let alone that fact that I even exist. I love you--you fool. Thanks for that.

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This article has 4 comments.

Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 6:24 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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aha, i love your ending! its amazing! :D 

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:18 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2217 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"

My favorite line: "I pray for a never ending never
Because it latches me onto you"

on May. 24 2010 at 10:36 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

i LOVE THIS i can relate to this in soo many ways love it love u good job partner

on May. 20 2010 at 10:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

"I dance between unseen boarders","dim,black,gone,thanks alot","catch the raindrops for you",and "count the grass blades for you"=man youre good. 5 stars captain. they have to love it. they just have to....


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