i am someone

May 8, 2010
blue eyes,
blonde hair,
long legs,
it’s not fair.
it’s not fair,
because I am someone,
but people think,
because I’m shy,
I am no one.
full of hope,
love and care,
crying tears,
it’s not fair.
young but strong,
tall but weak,
have my opinions,
but too quiet to speak.
naïve but experienced,
afraid to share,
what I know...
because to you,
I am no one.
but you are wrong,
and it’s not true,
I am someone,
even if I’m not to you.

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XxDream_in_ColorxX said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 2:20 pm
Gah!  Again, with the amazing-ness.  I wish I could write as well.  There's never anything to critique here.  Loved this.  =]
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 2:36 pm
wow thank you so much, again:D
Sammy said...
May 21, 2010 at 10:00 am
I thought this was terrific, well done, well said and so honest on the feelings of this writer, just beautiful, keep up the great work I can see success in your future for writing
Poodlebutt said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:38 am
Great job!!  Loved it:)
pita chip said...
May 18, 2010 at 4:15 pm
I agree....I look forward to reading more from this author as well!
PotatoHead said...
May 18, 2010 at 4:11 pm
Thats amazing!!!!!! Good job!!!! Your a fantastic writer! I can't wait to check out some more of your work!!!!
pita chip said...
May 18, 2010 at 4:07 pm
wow...very meaningful...Love it!... :)
PotatoHead replied...
May 18, 2010 at 4:13 pm
I agree with you.
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