The Girl Who Lived Twice

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Taken for granted,
An angel without her promised wings.
She has seen the gates of heaven,
And the sins of man.
She has walked on clouds,
And walked on gravel in an alley.
She has danced in the rain,
And danced above it.

Rest and collect yourself,
Think with your heart.
Live carefree and observe with me,
This world you've been in and out of,
Tell me what the other side was like,
And when you go again, take the world with you.

Her name is Miracle,
Her thoughts are a mystery,
Her voice is new,
Her breathe is a strangers,
And her love is mine.

The gift to live twice,
Is only hers,
And she's watched over me,
Since fate took her away,
But she's back, unexpected.
Love, renewed.

Angel,
Be human with me,
I'm not sending you to the crypt again,
Restraint and fear,
Love and confessions of it.

Her name is Miracle,
Her thoughts are a mystery,
Her voice is new,
Her breathe is a strangers,
And her love is eternally mine.

Hurt so many times before,
How many more feathers are on your wings?
Can you take it forever?
In love with love,
Hope is better suited for you than the world.





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SophiaCross said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 7:13 pm

The depth to this is incredible! I think I am going to make this one of my favorites...

Other than that, I am speechless

 
Patience97 said...
May 20, 2010 at 3:30 pm

Is this the girl you like? You have a nice way of capture her.

I like the way this poem could be interperted differently.

It could be a physical person, the idea of one, or a miracle.

 
ElijahNoble replied...
May 20, 2010 at 4:15 pm
thank you, and yes she's my love interest.  what poem do you want me to read of yours?
 
ElijahN replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 2:27 pm
do you want me to read a poem of yours?
 
kirbybug said...
May 15, 2010 at 8:57 pm
very nice!!! it is a peice not many peole would understand and could also be looked at in many different ways!! once again it was a great peice!! in opinions my peice wass just posted under kirby bug"basic beliefs" if u would look at it and comment that would be great thanks!!!!!!
 
ElijahNoble replied...
May 17, 2010 at 9:15 pm
gladly. and thank you.
 
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