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The Girl Who Lived Twice

April 26, 2010
By ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-


Taken for granted,
An angel without her promised wings.
She has seen the gates of heaven,
And the sins of man.
She has walked on clouds,
And walked on gravel in an alley.
She has danced in the rain,
And danced above it.

Rest and collect yourself,
Think with your heart.
Live carefree and observe with me,
This world you've been in and out of,
Tell me what the other side was like,
And when you go again, take the world with you.

Her name is Miracle,
Her thoughts are a mystery,
Her voice is new,
Her breathe is a strangers,
And her love is mine.

The gift to live twice,
Is only hers,
And she's watched over me,
Since fate took her away,
But she's back, unexpected.
Love, renewed.

Angel,
Be human with me,
I'm not sending you to the crypt again,
Restraint and fear,
Love and confessions of it.

Her name is Miracle,
Her thoughts are a mystery,
Her voice is new,
Her breathe is a strangers,
And her love is eternally mine.

Hurt so many times before,
How many more feathers are on your wings?
Can you take it forever?
In love with love,
Hope is better suited for you than the world.



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on Jun. 12 2011 at 7:13 pm
SophiaCross SILVER, Plattsburgh, New York
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Favorite Quote:
To love, to be loved. To never forget your own insignificance. To never get used to the unspeakable violence and vulgar disparity of the life around you. To seek joy in the saddest places. To pursue beauty to its lair. To never simplify what is complicated or complicate what is simple. To respect strength, never power. Above all to watch. To try and understand. To never look away. And never, never to forget.”

The depth to this is incredible! I think I am going to make this one of my favorites...

Other than that, I am speechless


on Jun. 9 2010 at 2:27 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

do you want me to read a poem of yours?

on May. 20 2010 at 4:15 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

thank you, and yes she's my love interest.  what poem do you want me to read of yours?

on May. 20 2010 at 3:30 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Is this the girl you like? You have a nice way of capture her.

I like the way this poem could be interperted differently.

It could be a physical person, the idea of one, or a miracle.


on May. 17 2010 at 9:15 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

gladly. and thank you.

on May. 15 2010 at 8:57 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

very nice!!! it is a peice not many peole would understand and could also be looked at in many different ways!! once again it was a great peice!! in opinions my peice wass just posted under kirby bug"basic beliefs" if u would look at it and comment that would be great thanks!!!!!!


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