Tale of a Breaking Heart

By , Wolcott, NY
Do you always feel unfamiliar?
Though everybody seems similar

Do people always say to you
Nobody will ever love you?

Do you feel yourself hurting?
Before you see the bleeding?

Do you feel like you would die?
For one who is never by your side

Can you feel your heart breaking?
When you know you shouldn't be aching?





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BiancaMarie said...
May 19, 2010 at 10:42 am

awwwwww!

this is an ahmazing poem! keep writing! (=

comment and rate mine? THANKS ! (=

 
mikeytogo said...
May 17, 2010 at 11:28 pm
This is excatly how i feel.......
 
iknowyourheart said...
May 17, 2010 at 4:39 pm
My God. AMEN!!! 
 
trumpetgirl711 said...
May 16, 2010 at 10:05 pm
wow! Awesome poem!
 
Courtnay said...
May 16, 2010 at 5:35 pm
WOW!!!this is really good.....i luv'd it!!!<3
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2010 at 1:45 pm
this is really good-nice job!!!!!
 
Winter-Wolf said...
May 15, 2010 at 9:27 pm
I can relate so much to the last to stanzas. I have recently felt my heart breaking, when I know it shouldn't even be aching. It's like when you love someone and they barely know you. You already feel attached, and you know you shouldn't already have fallen so hard.
 
Goober replied...
May 16, 2010 at 6:46 pm
this is a great poem I'm glad I got to read it.
 
MetalChick93 replied...
May 17, 2010 at 9:39 am
omg this had so much feeling and emotion to it, you could feel yourself in the story the writer was portraying...i know exactly how it feels to have your heart break.... all i can say is that time's the best healer. i loved this poem, it was so sad and sweet. definitely one of my favs.
 
asian-persuasion replied...
May 17, 2010 at 11:47 am
aw that is so sweet. i love it when guys write poems. especially when its a sweet one for another girl. too bad i've never actually dated a guy sweet enough to do something like that for me... we need more guys like you in the world!!! lol
 
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