Tale of a Breaking Heart

April 26, 2010
By Anonymous

Do you always feel unfamiliar?
Though everybody seems similar

Do people always say to you
Nobody will ever love you?

Do you feel yourself hurting?
Before you see the bleeding?

Do you feel like you would die?
For one who is never by your side

Can you feel your heart breaking?
When you know you shouldn't be aching?

The author's comments:
To Kei-Lyn my only love, please don't break my heart

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on May. 19 2010 at 10:42 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all


this is an ahmazing poem! keep writing! (=

comment and rate mine? THANKS ! (=

on May. 17 2010 at 11:28 pm
mikeytogo SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Scat man, fat man, black and white and brown man, tell me 'bout the color of your soul."- Scat man.

This is excatly how i feel.......

on May. 17 2010 at 4:39 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

My God. AMEN!!! 

on May. 17 2010 at 11:47 am
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
keep on keeping on

aw that is so sweet. i love it when guys write poems. especially when its a sweet one for another girl. too bad i've never actually dated a guy sweet enough to do something like that for me... we need more guys like you in the world!!! lol

on May. 17 2010 at 9:39 am
MetalChick93 BRONZE, West Harisson, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Love is as beautiful as a wild rose, calm and giving, but willing to draw blood in it's defense. - Mark Olsen

omg this had so much feeling and emotion to it, you could feel yourself in the story the writer was portraying...i know exactly how it feels to have your heart break.... all i can say is that time's the best healer. i loved this poem, it was so sad and sweet. definitely one of my favs.

on May. 16 2010 at 10:05 pm
trumpetgirl711, Tucson, Arizona
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wow! Awesome poem!

Goober said...
on May. 16 2010 at 6:46 pm
this is a great poem I'm glad I got to read it.

on May. 16 2010 at 5:35 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
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WOW!!!this is really good.....i luv'd it!!!<3

on May. 16 2010 at 1:45 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

this is really good-nice job!!!!!

on May. 15 2010 at 9:27 pm
Clementine SILVER, Gustavus, Alaska
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I can relate so much to the last to stanzas. I have recently felt my heart breaking, when I know it shouldn't even be aching. It's like when you love someone and they barely know you. You already feel attached, and you know you shouldn't already have fallen so hard.


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