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Life on Hold

April 26, 2010
By Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
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Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
19 articles 6 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

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A little girl of 7
Nieve and laughing
Plotting what to do next
Oblivious to the cruel world around her
A girl of 12
Starting middle school
Talking about "When I grow up..."
Making plans to be a vet
Coloring pictures of rainbows and sunsets
A lady of 15
Dreams shattered with the growing bubble
Brain surgery needed to make it quit
Everything put on hold
All her dreams now untold
And for what?
A loveless god!?

© Roxana R., Tustin, CA

The author's comments:
Inspired by my little sister who has a growth on her brain stem and whom i just found out must get surgery to remove it cause its growing. keep her in your prayers please.
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Mina4Eva GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 1:40 pm
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
19 articles 6 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

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so she went in for surgery this morning i have yet to hear any news but she was admitted yesturday cause of a sever headache found it grew and was putting pressure and now its just by ear hope for her health please
Mina4Eva GOLD said...
on May. 19 2010 at 12:45 pm
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
19 articles 6 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

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thanks im not religious either cause if there were a god he wouldnt do this or all the other s*** he dose lol it means alot though thanks
Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 5:45 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

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"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

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This is powerful, i like the progression of time. May the power of the universe bring luck to your sister. (I'm non-religious, so i wish the universe to people, instead of a religious symbol.)
Mina4Eva GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 10:23 am
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
19 articles 6 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

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hanks so much it means alot
carriethebeliever BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 10:19 am
carriethebeliever BRONZE, L-burg, Kentucky
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"Get lost. You might find yourself."

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I am so sorry about your sister. This is an amazing poem. It sent me stright to tears.
Kilia GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 8:29 pm
Kilia GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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At your weakest you learn to be at your strongest.

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This is a beautiful poem. It's simplistic, but it really punches you in the gut when you read it.

 

I'm very sorry for your sister. I wish her strength to make it through.

CrazySquid GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 5:06 pm
CrazySquid GOLD, Cashmere, Washington
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"For beauty is nothing but the begining of terror"

Rilke part of 'The Tenth Elgy'

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Wow its beautiful!!!

So sad...I was almost crying by the end. To dream so big and then have a chance to lose it all. Please Please keep me updated if you can most defiently prayers!

Mina4Eva GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 2:02 pm
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
19 articles 6 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

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thank you all so much for everything!!! ur so kind ill keep you posted if you want

 

Mina4Eva GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 2:02 pm
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
19 articles 6 photos 8 comments

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"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

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thanks it took alot to not cry while writing it
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 11:44 am
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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keep on keeping on

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omg, this is so sad. i am so sorry, even though sorry doesn't help. i will be praying for her. everything happens for a reason. never give up on God. no matter what
Saidah. GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 7:41 am
Saidah. GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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WoW ! THis IS Amazing !
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2010 at 8:39 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

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She is in my prayers -- I promise. I'd pray for everyone on this Earth if I could :( But I can't, not enough time. I think it is better to take action rather than hope and pray for the best, but sometimes, hoping and praying is the most you can do.

Wonderful poem, truthful.

CharlotteManning BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2010 at 1:16 pm
CharlotteManning BRONZE, San Marino, California
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"I have shared my heart, and tolled its' burdens. I have see death, i have seen pain. I will laugh once more, and cry too. For i know now what I have to accomplish… i have to live".

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that was amazing! It was filled with so much emotion, an really spoke to the reader!