lifetime

April 26, 2010
By chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
be you and nothing more nothing less


All we have is time in this thing we call life
how do we use it?
where does it go?
how do we get it back?
the answer is that no one knows.
Time is time and simply that.
you cant abuse it or misuse it or with time you will ultimatley lose it. becareful whta you ask for and who you trust.the time you waste on things that are inevitable is extremely irreplaceable. take your time use it wisely and responsibly. take moments to understand your meaning in this time and do all that you set out to do. we all wish there was that button we could press to stop the mess, but if it were meant to be there would be no time to progress and press forward. time is of the essence and cannot be gotten back.


The author's comments:
i wrote this poem while thinking about life and how i could've would've and should've changed thing but time stops for no one.

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chosen BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2010 at 11:11 am
chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
be you and nothing more nothing less

thank u so much for reading

 


chosen BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2010 at 11:10 am
chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
be you and nothing more nothing less

thak you sooo much and i will

on May. 19 2010 at 3:08 pm
margierose GOLD, New York, New York
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Wow that's amazing!!! Keep writing you have real talent. Would you mind reading mine?

Mina4Eva GOLD said...
on May. 19 2010 at 12:51 pm
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

wow your poem is sooo amazing and true u captured the vary way of life in such a short poem truly a masterpiece :)

on May. 18 2010 at 9:26 pm
madegclover6 SILVER, Van Nuys, California
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idk i have alot

i really like that you wrote about how you really feel. good job! time goes by faster then you ever will know.

chosen BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 11:50 am
chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
be you and nothing more nothing less

thanks much

on May. 17 2010 at 4:31 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

i loved it until you mixed in the "responsibility." It seems to undermine the essence of time and its spontaneity..

on May. 17 2010 at 3:02 pm
BeYOUtiful_13 BRONZE, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.”
~Marilyn Monroe

yeah no problem

chosen BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 12:22 pm
chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
be you and nothing more nothing less

thank very much

chosen BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 12:22 pm
chosen BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
be you and nothing more nothing less

thank you very much

on May. 16 2010 at 8:36 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

I like this piece because it makes me want to act now, and use my "time" wisely. Before it's all gone :(

on May. 16 2010 at 7:48 am
BeYOUtiful_13 BRONZE, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.”
~Marilyn Monroe

its good .


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