May 12, 2010
By Robbie Denniston SILVER, Hartland, Wisconsin
Robbie Denniston SILVER, Hartland, Wisconsin
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I have walked these halls for four years.
Now I can’t even look in the mirrors.
The ones that look back at me with eyes,
Because I didn’t stop their cries.
I brush past them few times a year,
But it may have been me who stopped the tears.
They needed someone who hadn’t left,
As I pretended like I was deaf.
I turned them away,
I didn’t have time,
Besides you are not my kind.
Now I can see the mistake I have made,
And I try to deny the truth that hurts
But we both know what I could’ve done,
To stop the boy who pulled the gun.

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on May. 18 2010 at 12:24 pm
FireWhiskey SILVER, Durango, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreams are only Dreams, unless you do something about them, than they're life"
~By me

This is amazing and so true. I really want to look at more of your work.

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on May. 17 2010 at 8:38 pm
Kilia GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
At your weakest you learn to be at your strongest.

wow.. this is very well written. the last two lines really hit home hard.

If this is true about you... damn... that is a lot to bear on your shoulders. I'm sorry.

I hope writing helps you get it out.

on May. 17 2010 at 1:04 pm
Jade-McKaye SILVER, West Jordan, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
what happened to a dream?

this is way good:) absolutely love it

on May. 16 2010 at 2:18 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow this is awesome-it reminds me of a degrassi episode kind of-but anyway really good!!!

on May. 16 2010 at 1:36 pm
mariahLynn SILVER, Craig, Colorado
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Wow this is really great! its really good. you should cheak out some of my work.


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