The Problem with Relationships This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

April 22, 2010
The problem with love
is that it never lasts long enough
Truth gets in the way;
Death,
A new girl,
A new guy,
and the flame dies out.
Love is a sort of hope
A sort of dream for the future
If love is hope,
Break-ups are reality.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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rloveswriting0011 said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 2:06 pm
i love* this,
 
HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 10:57 pm
why doesn't it last?  it should.  are you giving enough?  love outlasts everything.  if it didn't seem to go on, then it wasn't love.  the poem was beautiful, the words were so sad.  and although i really like it, i so totally disagree.
 
Kristine said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 4:13 pm
This is so true!!  Good job!!
 
SaMiLoVe97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 4:20 pm
:D I am in LOVE with this(: (: (:. Soo true!! Great job :D
 
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