"Declared Insane by a Rainbow of Thoughts"

April 22, 2010
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A kaleidoscope of thoughts all rushing towards me with the force of a category five hurricane.

One thought replaces another like a game of dominoes.

I just wish these thoughts would all subside; I just wish they would go!!!

Like a rainbow, dark though it may be, one thought slides down into another, but gold won’t be found here.

It’ll be dirt that’s found, all dark and dreary.

Love won’t exist.

Only hate and pain.

For those are the most dominant feelings, at least in my head it’s that way.

But you’ll have to excuse me.

After all, I have been declared insane.

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Basketball23 said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 4:46 pm
This is really good...sometimes I feel this way ;))
Starrlyt replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 12:55 pm
I think in a way, we all feel this way....
Basketball23 replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 2:39 pm
I agree completely!!!
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2010 at 8:44 am
"love wont exist. only hate and pain".After all i have been declared insane. its funny what great works people write when they're mentally troubled. 5 stars captain. you deserve a cucumber.
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