That broken day

April 22, 2010
By windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.


I could feel the tears as they flowed,
feel my feet slip off my only raod,
my love was slowly slipping away,
so was my life, on that broken day.

I cried, like I have never done before,
my life was over, I wanted it no more,
we embraced, drenched in a pool of our tears,
this sorrow was one of our few fears.

I looked in your eyes, and saw my sorrow reflected,
fate had come to break what it long neglected,
break me away from her, on that broken day,
the day that the world saw nothing but grey.

We embraced, we creid, and we both died,
our love was taken, our lives were over, so we creid,
that is the story of true love taken away,
that is the story, of that broken day.


The author's comments:
i wrote this piece after I lost my one true love for awhile.

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on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:17 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

it is what happens when you lose someone you love, it is entirely understandable, thank you for taking the time to read and post a comment.  keep writing, you will have a brilliant career if you work for it.

on May. 13 2010 at 9:40 pm
Lollipop2012 SILVER, Las Veags, Nevada
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wow. you're a great writer, and i feel like that really is what happens, because thats how i felt when i lost my true love.


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