Shock MAG

April 13, 2010
By Julia Pylant BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
Julia Pylant BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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I drift off
Into the numbness they call shock.
I can feel cold overtake my body.
Part of my heart is cold and still,
The other warm and beating.
My thoughts grow foggy.
I cannot think.
I feel an empty void grow in place of
my heart,
Yet I still breathe,
I still walk.
So tell me now,
Why you cannot.



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BillM GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 9:37 pm
BillM GOLD, JACKSONVILLE, Florida
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Wow, this was a powerful poem. Awesome read.


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