i dare you This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I dare you to walk in my shoes
First step:
You'll falter
Second step:
You'll stumble
Third step:
You'll trip
Fourth step:
You'll fall
So until you take those four steps
I take every day
Don't judge
Keep your thoughts to yourself
Turn around
Walk away
And be grateful for the shoes you're in

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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xAllegria said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 8:00 am
Nice... good job.
 
Nikkira3 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 2:42 pm
I absolutly love this, its deep, its beautiful, but better yet its true. Check out some of my stuff i think you would like it. It has the same deepness behind it.
 
TamaraMari3 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 10:15 am
I love this. Short and sweet! Beautifully written:]
 
Lifetime said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 4:56 pm
this relate to so many things not only what you wrote it for...
 
drowning-in-sorrow said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 11:08 pm
this is a really great poem.
 
nenna said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 9:56 am
i know how you feel. people always assume that i am quiet because i  am stuck up or think i am better than them, but they don't know what really goes on in my life.
 
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