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The Bird

April 15, 2010
By Anonymous

I watch the struggle from a distance
A bird with a broken wing
Should I help? I questioned myself
I see him resting in a pool of blood
Should I clean the feathers?
I start towards him
He starts towards the edge
I see him look out into the sky so I got closer
Then I saw him jump
He was airborne for a second
Briefly I saw the freedom
I saw his pain
Then I saw him fall
I looked over the edge and saw him fall to the ground
Like my spirit
Shattered on the rocky floor below
For a second I wanted to jump to
I wanted to feel free
But I was afraid



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on Feb. 1 2011 at 11:10 pm
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Thanks for the suggestion It does need some work.

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on Feb. 1 2011 at 4:30 pm
Kellie_F., Navarre, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice. Then spen the rest of your life trying to figure out how you did it-Anonymous
DONT DIS THE SONIC!-The Doctor;Doctor Who

Very well written, I feel it needs a little more of an ending. "But I was afraid just doesn't seem concluding.