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Pheonix

She soars, her feathers dark
Against the night sky she flies-
Unseen by any eye
Darkness her companion,
Her’s is a long shadowed flight.

Starlight behind her, the moon’s light to guide her
Effortlessly through the constellations she flows.
And no one ever knows.

Yet, with morn’s coming dawn
The grey of the sky-
Her presence cannot deny.
Shake her feathers,
Raise her head-
Released from endless ebony skies

Feathers alight-
With sunshine’s bright flame-
Glowing bright yellow and red,
She is raised,
Alive-
Herself again

Soaring ever on,
Effortlessly through the bright sunlit sky
Wings proud and high-
Feathers alight from the fires burning inside

So longer will she hide-
No longer the darkness seek.



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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 7:36 pm:
this is really orginal! not many people could write something so good on the subject! :)
 
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Megan.J.B said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 4:13 pm:
Extremely interesting poem! :) I was drawn into this poem actually from the minute I began reading it. Very Well Done! :)
 
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Anagam said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 7:52 pm:
o.m.gosh!! this is beautiful!! love it, love it, love it, etc. :P. while i was reading the beginning I felt peace and solace and by the end so much power. amazing :D great job!
 
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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 10:18 pm:
Amazing poem!  I love the beautiful imagery you incorporated into your poem.  My only criticism is about your title: it's spelled 'Phoenix', not 'Pheonix.'
 
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KittyPanda said...
May 19, 2010 at 2:42 pm:
wow. i really like this. i love how you worded it.
 
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