April 21, 2010
I can’t feel the wind anymore
The sun has lost its shine
All I hear are whispers
But they’re not mine
Every second it grows worse
Memories are growing fainter
As the longing is growing stronger
It’s so hard to breath sometimes
The pressure weighs me down
There’s nothing to be done
The loneliness has taken me over
I’m so lonely
Come and save me
Take me out of here
And talk to me
Make me remember
Teach me how to laugh again
Tell me that you’re my friend
Comfort me
Save me
I’m so lonely

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lildutchgurl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 7:29 pm
I have definitely felt this way before :( beautifully written
H2Omelon said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:41 am
Wow! In all your poems you have a gift of using awesome word illustrations!  It makes me see what you are feeling!  Keep up the great work!
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