hazel eyes

April 20, 2010
i see it in your hazel eyes
i feel it in the heat of your touch
i feel it in the passion of your kiss
i hear it in the sweetness of your voice
i know that you want me to be your only one





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Leona95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 5:08 pm

I really like how it starts with lower case eyes. it is short and sweet. keep up the good work

 

 
AshleyW said...
May 10, 2010 at 9:29 am
I love the picture, it goes beautifully with the poem
 
always-sunshine replied...
May 10, 2010 at 11:30 am
thank you!!!1
 
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